The opening scene of a love affair
Homework, Writers Group, 21st December 2011
20.12.2011
ASSIGNMENT: By describing what and who is in a real or imaginary place, set the scene and open the story about (a) a murder, (b) a love affair or (c) a comical event.
This morning is a Monday morning. This street is the main street. The bench at the bus stop is vacant bar for a pair of noisy Indian Minors scolding the passers by. People exit their houses to embark on their mission for the day. For many this mission begins at the nearby coffee shop. For others the mission begins by driving to work over the speed limit so the overnight emails can be checked a few minutes earlier.
The man arrives at the bus stop and sits down on the bench. The Indian Minors loudly complain and fly off. The man pulls out his Blackberry and studies the screen.
The woman arrives at the bus stop and sits down on the bench. She has the morning tabloid and opens it up to the middle pages.
He glances across at her. He finds her quite attractive. She smells nice. Her long brown hair is tied up to reveal modest ear rings. Her glasses make her look serious. Her heels reveal her to be a woman who doesn't care much for comfort nor practicalities. He can't see what she is reading but he imagines her to be immersed in the Letters to the Editor. He takes a long look at her hand holding the edge of the paper - no ring on the ring finger. He consciously works out if he is looking at her right hand or left hand.
She glances at him. He is totally immersed in his Blackberry screen. She thinks he has a friendly face. His suit is unbuttoned but his tie is perfectly knotted up tight. His shoes are those of a man who is in charge and in control. She imagines he works as a stock broker and he is now studying the overnight share prices. She sees his left ring finger is vacant.
The bus comes rumbling down the street. The man and the woman stand up from the bench. She folds up her tabloid. He slides his Blackberry into an inner suit pocket. The bus arrives and the doors open with a clatter. She steps onto the bus. He admires the shape of her skirt before stepping onto the bus himself. The doors close with a clatter ...
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